However, I have noticed a development in my writing that will help me continue to grow as a writer. In my first essay, “How to Get Away With Murder,” my professor left the comment “I really want to see what you like about the show. You tend to keep those positive affirmations in one sentence. We must work to develop examples." I can tell from my professor's comment on my third essay, “The Dark Side Of Hollywood,” that my writing has progressed because he said, “…this essay is very strong. It is supported by extensive research and strong consensus.” Earlier this semester I regretted not dropping this course, however I'm glad I didn't because I gained essential skills that will help me in writing