In "Star-Nosed Mole", author Sean Zera writes an interesting article about the star-nosed mole. The purpose of his article is to inform readers of many intriguing facts about the star-nosed mole. Some questions Zera answers in her article are: what they look like, where they live, what they eat and even how they communicate with each other. Your article is great because it explains almost everything about the star-nosed mole. Another thing that Zera does to strengthen her article is that she has categories that ask a common question and then in that category she answers that question and provides an abundance of facts that help support her answer. The only two things that weaken his article are the lack of pictures and the comparison to a regular. These moles are very characteristic and easily identifiable thanks to their nose. It has one of the most impressive noses in the animal kingdom which makes this strange-looking creature a lethal hunter. Around the nose they have twenty-two pink fleshy appendages that serve as a tactile organ. The external tentacles probe for a potential meal, then internal sensors decide whether the prey is edible. They are covered in thick, blackish-brown, water-repellent fur, have large scaled feet and a long, thick tail. This animal is by far one of the most interesting animals in the world despite looking like a cross between a mouse and an octopus. The way he behaves and uses his star nose is fascinating and makes him very unique compared to others. Only two small images are shown in Zera's entire article. These two images don't really show the star-nosed mole in its full extent. Zera needs to show lots of photos of the Star-Nosed Mole. It should also show some maps and graphs to go along with some answers to the questions. One place you should put a map is where it answers the question of where they live. Even if he explains it in the paragraph, he should also provide a picture of a map showing where the Star-Nosed Mole lives. Another thing Zera could do to strengthen her article is add a comparison to a normal mole. The star-nosed mole is very different from a normal mole and a comparison would help strengthen his article greatly. Overall, Zera's strengths outweigh its weaknesses and make the article very interesting. His article explains almost everything about the star-nosed mole and answers many questions readers might have and provides numerous facts that help support his answer. To improve his article, he should add more pictures and maps and also add a comparison with a normal mole. His article is very factual and will most likely answer any questions you may have about Star Nose